What's up with the kid in the background? Kind of ruins the feeling of the song. I'm guessing it's supposed to be deep and everything like Nickelback or something, but you missed the target. As for audio quality, go to Amazon and look up some Shure mics, they will help you improve you quality.
At least you got one thing right... this music is alternative. As in give me something alternative to listen to so I don't have to hear this any longer.